No, see...I'm sure there are things you'd change if you were going to post this for real, but it still works! (and honestly? I wasn't expecting you to use all four phrases in a single ficlet, so I'm *very* impressed that you were able to manage it as well as you did and as *quickly* as you did). Thank you!
Re: Not my finest ...
Date: 2005-08-07 02:39 pm (UTC)